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Richardvz
22-02-2008, 08:04 AM
I am not by any stretch of the imagination a poet of any kind.

But I just wrote this last night. I was feeling a little down, it is mainly to help me cope.

But here we go (don't laugh...)






We Shall ride.


When we ride our earthbound chariots,
The wind just whistling by.
We smell the earthly pleasures,
As we take to wings and fly.

The day will dawn for all of us,
To ride that silver cloud.
When we leave behind our loved ones,
And ones we've sworn our vows.

But fear not that lonely highway,
For soon you'll join my side.
Among the amazing skyway,
With our brothers we shall ride.


Rest In Peace Buccaneer.

CowGirl
22-02-2008, 08:07 AM
Beautiful ;)

DaCat
22-02-2008, 08:08 AM
8) :cry:

Nice one Richard

Bad Girl
22-02-2008, 08:12 AM
That gave me the chills.....

Well done Richard - absolutely beautiful

Cronos
22-02-2008, 08:16 AM
Stunning!! 8)

Beachbum
22-02-2008, 08:24 AM
Rich........jeez boet, that was really nice.......


Seeing a lot of latent talent on this forum the last few days...!!!

Makes me think a little....mmmmmmmmm

Djay
22-02-2008, 08:32 AM
Very nice Richard 8) 8)

Tripper
22-02-2008, 09:02 AM
Very touching, and beautifully written. :thumbleft:

Lucyfer
22-02-2008, 09:52 AM
:cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:

You say you don't think you are a poet.... funny how difficult situations teach us things we never really knew about ourselves. I'd say you are very poetic ;)

Crash
22-02-2008, 10:36 AM
Nice one Richard !!!

Trumpet
22-02-2008, 11:49 AM
Good one dude!

theRéhann
22-02-2008, 11:59 AM
:thumbright:



:( :cry:

Miss Pris
22-02-2008, 01:25 PM
Very nice :cry:

Velvet T
22-02-2008, 04:39 PM
Aaaaw

Rich.. that is beautiful!!!

:cry: :cry: :cry:

Hug that crazy wife of yours xtra tight tonight and tell her.. I say hi!
I REALLY miss her

:cry: :cry: :cry:

Richardvz
25-02-2008, 08:30 AM
Awwww fanks guys...

I wish I would not have to write things like this....

wannabee
27-02-2008, 12:23 PM
shew.. that gave me goosebumps from my head to my toes... very nice...